What does “show don’t tell” means?
When you write about something without saying what it is by using
When you write about something without saying what it is by using
How can we re-write these sentences to “show” and not “tell”?
1. Sarah was really upset - Sarah was yelling and swearing
1. Sarah was really upset - Sarah was yelling and swearing
2. She was so happy to see him - She was smiling joyfully to see him.
3, The lake was beautiful - The lake simmered bright
I liked they way u tried to make each one more descriptive then the last.
ReplyDeleteI think you could try make them more descriptive and a bit longer.