I like that you have a picture to show what you were doing this week. I think that maybe you could add some more information to your questions. But overall I think you did a good job.
I like how you said it was hard keeping the kite up. I think that maybe you could fix the sentence "Keeping the kite up was hard but we got it was up" because on the last part it says "we got it was up" which really don't make sense for me.
I like that you have a picture to show what you were doing this week.
ReplyDeleteI think that maybe you could add some more information to your questions. But overall I think you did a good job.
I like how you said it was hard keeping the kite up. I think that maybe you could fix the sentence "Keeping the kite up was hard but we got it was up" because on the last part it says "we got it was up" which really don't make sense for me.
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